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starts quite fast

starts quite fast
yet could take a while
its something to cherrish
though some may not

it is a beautiful thing
that may never be experienced by some
it could last a while
or may end very soon

when its over we greive
we dont know how to deal
some better then others
but everyone upset and full of despair

it is full of happiness
sadness too
sometimes you think your in comtrol
or you could not be

it is a never ending cycle
that always comes to an end
it is a thing like no other
that is called by people 'life'

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Written April 19th, 2006

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  • Lucky 2006
    April 20, 2006
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    comtrol Should it be control just a ?... This is a true thing... I like it a lot and good luck in this contest.... Keep on writing and reading...