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waving good bye

waving good bye

one last time

seeing the tears

formimg in your eyes

of course you knew

it would end this way

so why on earth

did you ever stay

to hear the wind

blowing each day

to feel sand in your feet

thats why you never did leave

because to run away

would be to admit you were wrong

to show the world

that you cant always be strong

it would be an escape you could not risk

without having to worry every day

that is why

you had to stay

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Written April 19th, 2006

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  • Epsilina
    April 19, 2006
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    I liked the poem *even though you still haven't written a non-rhyming one for me*.
    I like how I can sort of see the poem, but it's not like, blocky in my mind, well, I can't explain it, it was a good poem though.