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If Only I Could Hate You..

Why did you do what you did?
Why did you say what you said?

Because of that night
I'll never forgive you
If I could
Hatred would fell my insides
But like I told you before
I could never hate you

I don't ever want to see you again
With the exception
Of you gettin your things

I don't ever want to talk to you again
Not on the phone
And especially not on the net

Forget I ever existed
For I'm doing the same

I can't believe I actually loved you
How could I?
When all you ever told me were lies

Deny it all you want
But if you did tell me the truth
Why aren't we together again?
Exactly, your a liar!

You may want to be friends
And why's that I ask?
So you can come back again
For another one night stand?
I don't think so..

I'm done with you..
If only I can hate you..

Author notes

this is kinna mean and hurtful but its how I feel now twards my ex.. and if his sister is reading this don't take it the wrong way please.. I'm just gettin how I feel out..
Written April 19th, 2006

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  • hissingsid
    April 21, 2006
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    Touching

    Rae, u tried. . .
    u waited and u cried. . .
    the hated u because u didn't believe he lied. . .
    now you know the truth,
    you have no need to wait,
    no need to hope,
    and no NEED to hate.

  • HoPeLeSs RaE
    April 20, 2006
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    hun i want to tell him but i dont kno how to word it!!! im serious!! i wish we could be friends but yea.. it wont happen cuz i cant trust him.. which sux.. but im over it! haha help me out! tell me wat to tell him! he's ur brother!! lolz ttylz! muchlove~Rae


  • a-s-a-p
    April 19, 2006
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    rae rae tell him! tell himz how u feel...btw...THIS IS HIS SISTER! lol peace

  • HoPeLeSs RaE
    April 19, 2006
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    aw thanks for the comment! actually i really hope we can work all of this out in the future.. but it really hurt when he told me we could probably try again but he goes and gets another girl.. idk.. maybe somewhere down the road all will be forgiven.. thanks again for the comment!! muchlove~Rae


  • blue128eyedkk
    April 19, 2006
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    This is really hurtful but sometimes the truth hurts. This is a great poem and i totally get what you are saying. This is how i feel towards my first ex. I hate him for all the crap that he put me through and that im trying to forget and move on with. This is how you feel and maybe in the very near future you guys can sit down and look back of how stupid some crap could be and etc. This is a great poem full of alot of emotion. I hope the best for you and that you can move on and not forget but remember how much he hurt you and what you went through and not make the same mistakes but learn from them. Great write and keep it up!

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