if I don't live my own dreams
who's dreams will I live?
Author notes
A PIXIKU: Invented by me: SEA
(Wild Child of Haiku and Senryu)
A short original personal quote (thought) of wisdom, humor, knowledge, moral, life experience or beauty etc. that YOU thought of set up any way you want to in THREE lines.
P ixiku is a short original personal quote (thought)
I nvented by me: SEA April 21, 2005
X eno to poetry and the wild child of Haiku and Senryu
I nvites your wisdom, humor, life experience, beauty etc.
K eeping a syllable count or lower case not required in three lines
U p to you how you set up to best express your message.
Written April 19th, 2006
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A contest entry
- Pixiku Poetry. Let's Pixiku Together. by SEA angel.
300 points, ended April 23, 2006, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Excellent
Very very true words from you there my friend.Lovely writing.Kenny -
Excellent, Joan. You have me thinking about the roots of self-confidence. Whose dreams are we living, our parents', our spouse's, our own, or no one's? Your short lines lead to an examination of how we are living, always a fruitful pursuit.
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EXCELLENT
This is spectacular. That's what Dr. Phil suggests that we be enthusiastic about who we are for if we are not how can we expect other's to be. We have to learn to be sold on ourselves and truly believe in oneself. I just LOVE this angel picture too. -
very good full of wisdom in a few lines
~~Pauline





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