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letting it out

i am letting it out
the love,sharing,and laughter

the touching and feeling
holding and kissing

i am letting it out
my feelings are strong

i have a feeling
that you and i are one

love holds us together
till oldness and through sickness

i am letting it out
that i love you and it is true

i cant hold it in or i swear i will burst
because i love you and no way to hide it

i am letting it out
i want us to be together forever

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Written April 18th, 2006

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  • rosepoet
    May 3, 2006
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    wonderful write expressing your true feelings I just entered your contest it is such a good idea
    Edited on May 03, 10:18 p.m. because ''.


  • -Rosie-
    April 23, 2006
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    cute!

    Which crush?

    PLEEEEEAASE TELL ME!


  • Glamour Kills xx
    April 19, 2006
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    This is very nice,

  • raven shadow 13
    April 18, 2006
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    Heh I think it's a good thing to let emotions out like that. It's nice to see something so clear cut. Very nice.
    Raven

  • misunderstood09
    April 18, 2006
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    i hope you all like it plz comment i beg (not really)
    -uncertiangirl-

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