When the stars refuse to shine,
when rivers all run dry.
When birds no longer sing,
when babies cannot cry.
Then we'll no longer feel,
anything of innocents real.
Nor will spirits rise on wings,
life unquenched dieing in sting.
When the stars no longer shine.
~~~Suseann~~~
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Written April 18th, 2006
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I would hate the world to end, just the thought of it is horrible, but you have written a very good poem of what it would be like, and I like this, well done.
best wishes as always
xElectricEyezx
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When the stars...a lovely write inspired by those three words. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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this is a nice piece, the best I have read so far!
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How lovely. .short and sweet.. even i chose the same line.. and wat a difference between both r poems
How different our muses play 
good luck dear
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Beautiful Suseann. You did a great job with the giving line. This reads like a daydream. Well done my friend. It is good to see you. Sorry I've been MIA again (well not really sorry...but you know what I mean
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~Lyrical
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BEAUTIFUL POEM SUSEANN
This sounds so sad yet in many ways it does ring true.
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Great!!!
Short and to the point, Suseann? End times is something that has been debated for centuries on end and yet no one is clear on that score. There is some substance in your words as those are some of the signs of the end times without any doubt.
We can all think of end times and make our own conclusions on that but no one but the Father in Heaven knows the day or the time.
Good luck in the contest.
Love and blessings from India - Joel -
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