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Tiny white pill?

"Tiny white pill?"
why yes, thank you
I'd love to continue the torture
I'd love to tear myself apart

"How about a little blue pill?
this one will help your anxiety and depression, you know"
oh, thank you
I'll let it dissolve in my mouth

Ill let the medication seep through my toung
into my throat
and into my blood
"thank you miss"

"Tiny green pill?
This one is new; just came out"
Of course, why not?
Nothing else could damage me anymore than I've already been

"Tiny white pill?"
Why thank you miss

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Written April 18th, 2006

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  • MissCassie
    July 14, 2006
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    I still love this poem.
    Cass

  • bleedingarms
    June 16, 2006
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    thanks babe.
    i<3 you

  • Rehgai
    April 22, 2006
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    NICKY IS SICKY!

    Even a P.O.S. poem is good. I won a gold trophy with one! Hated it from the start!
    I totally see what your saying, and someday, others will too. Love you always Nicky boy!
    ~Greg

  • bleedingarms
    April 22, 2006
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    I know, pills dont erase anything. if anything they create more problems. thanks for reading, im glad you enjoyed.

    <3 Kiersten

  • bleedingarms
    April 22, 2006
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    Your right, im glad you got the message, and agree. i hate the pressure. its neverending. Thanks Aly

    <3 Kiersten

  • bleedingarms
    April 22, 2006
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    your right i could have. this is just a P.O.S poem.... i just typed it out of nowhere.
    but thank you

  • MissCassie
    April 20, 2006
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    This is really deep, and it shows completely that a little pill won't erase your problems, and adding another little pill won't help at all. Well, anyways, great write, I really really enjoyedit. Awesome awesome write.
    Cassandra

  • Aly-Girl
    April 20, 2006
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    Great Job Hun

    I thought this poem was really good... because i think its true that everyone blames the user for the addiction when really its the others that pressure you into it telling you that they'll erase all your problems and everything else.. GReat job on this though!!
    <3
    Aly

  • Volst Conundrum
    April 20, 2006
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    good one dear.....the pills..true..so very true...u have a wonderful way of depicting what u feel.. dont know why..but i feel perhaps u could have worked a bit more on this piece..

    --- an admirer of thy writes..

    -- volst conundrum

  • bleedingarms
    April 18, 2006
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    Thank you

  • bleedingarms
    April 18, 2006
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    Thanks

  • A Samurai
    April 18, 2006
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    wow, i like this poem alot!


  • kkfox4
    April 18, 2006
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    powerful

    wow this is powerfull good job and keep writing

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