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seeing pain through a story

In his eyes she saw a song
Envisioned among shades of gold,
Its luster so- a beautiful song
To share with those in woe.

The melody grew and grew
Spun with a thread of abstract wool,
With hopes that end with deceit,
Left in between without a clue.

And she risked her heart and soul
For a song that brought her joy,
But love promises empty-handed
And her illusions are destroyed.

His eyes left with her voice
Past the borders: no return.
An empty whisper in her chest,
Her eyes bleeding as tears burn.

Author notes

This is really stupid hehe but... it came out naturally when I was in pain. Enjoy, laugh or whatever. Hehehe...
Written February 28th, 2006

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