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Always You

All this time I’ve been wandering without direction or ideal
I just couldn’t see that everything I’ve ever needed
Was always right here in front of me
It was always you I could count on
Always you that I could run to when there was no place left to hide
Know that there is no one in this world that I love as much as you
You make the sunrise and light up the night time sky
Because of you my world is a better place
Though sometimes you make me mad
And although there are times you make me want to cry
It matters not the least
It was always you who was worth it
Worth the effort, and the time it takes to try
It was and always will be you
You that I love through the rain and the shine
Always you in the good times and the bad
I love you now, I’ll love you forever
It‘s always you
Always you that will stay continuously on my mind

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Written April 18th, 2006

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  • Jimmy Jazz
    April 20, 2006
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    a strong title that shows up throughout the poem for a nice touch of emphasis...i hate to say heartfelt cause that words used to much on this site, but ill say that those line of truly loving allegience to whomever this is for are really great. Its not blind allegience either, like those lines about making you mad or sad are really important here is because youre acknowleging the others faults, but loving him in spite of them. nice work here