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Nature of a Symphony

Entangled motions fulfilling
something of thought provoking...

Traveled lingerings drift onward
as shadows played havoc within
our dance--silence has yet to
be portrayed

Quieted pleas of release soon
engulfs every nerve ending until
nothingness has not a name; warmth
beckons for sweet capture so formulation
can mingle with the lust wanton scent

His hands, calloused yet soft,
ripples in waves against the body
teasing it endlessly...


(and all that has occurred was the brisk
feel of the curtain)

Her hands, trembling though eager,
seeks out to bridge that gap of muted
stillness


(though all has happened was a caress upon
the sinew curvature of his body; hear him quake)

Desires mounting from which that can't
be explained, and yet, feelings of tantalized
music wavers in languid fluidity

Time has stopped but not our song-
allow the crumpled sheets to upturn
again to be fitted for another session...

Standing ovation

Author notes

Okay if you're wondering about the 'standing ovation' line then know right now that only refers to the 'afterglow' feel you have but know that you and your partner will has another roll
Written April 18th, 2006

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  • B Chandler
    April 21, 2006
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    Linda,
    thanks so much for the compliment

    Rae

  • B Chandler
    April 18, 2006
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    lol darkerknight be careful or youll end up retaking that cold shower again


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    April 18, 2006
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    Beautiful write. Very sensual. Love the use of your "stage" performance within this. Excellent job

    Storm


  • KnightRhymer
    April 18, 2006
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    Damn this was good. Good luck in the contest.