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Some Thoughts On Worry !

Some thoughts on worries

There will be no worries
no worries for sure
everyone will travel
travel their own path
seeking their destiny

Some will fail and win will some
some hearts will be broken
and some will be cherished
but there will be no worries
no worries in the end
for sure

Author notes

Just few lines flushed from the heart ~

Written April 18th, 2006

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  • Madhumita
    August 25, 2006
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    Great thoughts! Wonderfully woven into words! It truly shows that you have put down the words directly from your heart. Great presentation of thoughts!
    Madhumita


  • Inside and out
    April 20, 2006
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    Very nicely done. You are absolutely correct in that we will have no worries in the end. This is a very tender poem with a very powerful message. Well done!


  • mitimse
    April 20, 2006
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    thought provoking, at least

    It depends on whether you choose Heaven or Hell


  • doughjoe silver member
    April 19, 2006
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    I like this short write seems to me more could have been put into it but got the meaning across and to worry will make you old before your time nice write I glad to have clicked to this one and thank you for posting it....


  • mitimse
    April 19, 2006
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    prepare your heart now

    when the end comes, it's too late too worry anyway. Right?


  • i miss you...
    April 19, 2006
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    I like this poem, It's very good.


  • real irish rose
    April 18, 2006
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    sweet little piece

    Ahh sweet piece I wish that I didn't have any worries but because this is life, I have plenty of them to contend with but maybe some day when I am completely stable work wise etc..I no longer will have them hey that's wishful thinking for you !!
    Lovely piece xx

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