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Guardians

We cannot see just who they are
Nor hear the words they speak
We do not know from where they come
Or what it is they seek
They come to us to help us see
That sometimes right is wrong
Even when inside your heart
You feel you don't belong
Trust those feelings for they do know
What path in life is right
As these are signs from those we know
As Angels of the Light

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Written April 18th, 2006

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  • Stardust-luvr
    May 24, 2008

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    well written as we so often don't realize nor recognize the signs of our angelic guidances that overlook our lives with hope and strength deep within our hearts. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx

  • ImJustADude
    October 13, 2006
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    Very cool poem. I really liked the rhyme and thought the rhythm worked well too. The length worked too, for if it were any longer I think the slightly mysterious subject of the Guardians would be overplayed. Most Excellent!

  • andrew
    April 18, 2006
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    pimp7


    I really enjoyed it Keep up the wonderful work!

  • Availea
    April 18, 2006
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    Wonderful! I really enjoyed it. It seems that you have a deeper understanding of the universe. Keep up the wonderful work!
    Blessed Be & Brightest Blessings,
    Sarah AKA LadyDragonWolfe

  • GirlforGod
    April 18, 2006
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    WOW, thats one GREAT poem!! I really enjoyed this write..not only the context but the flow and rhyming was fantastic!!
    Exellent Job!!

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