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Well Worn

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Riding across the prairie
Warm wind upon my face
Tied to this land
My spirit one with this place

My moccasins are well worn
I wouldn't trade them for another
Killed last fall, I received them
From my beloved youngest brother

My head band was made with love
By my  big sisters hand
She left the tribe last year
Married, she joined another band

Riding across the prairie
Is where I feel most at home
Tied to mother earth
With her life giving loam

Just me and my horse
My soul feels truly free
At peace with myself
No where else I'd rather be








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I love Native American history, i feel a deep connection, my great grandmother was a native american.
Written April 17th, 2006

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  • Stardust100
    October 16, 2008
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    Great write


  • catz Moderators member
    October 16, 2008

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    A beautiful poem, filled with wonderful imagery and sincere appreciation of the Native American spirit.

    Good luck in the contest

    Dee


  • Meroza
    October 16, 2008
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    Wow, this is a amazing poem. Freedom is something I value high, but my connections are up in the moutains riding a raindear. Thats when I feel as one with the nature ^_^

    Best of luck!


  • Kari gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    I love the picture. It really makes the poem become alive and it's very well done. Thanks for sharing good luck in the contest


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 13, 2008

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    I do love native amarican history too...and specially all the feelings it creates....

    Good luck in this contest
    XXJeannette


  • as.phy.xi.ate. silver member
    October 13, 2008
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    Beautiful write lol you can see it in front of you!!!!

    Good Luck


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 13, 2008

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    this is wonderful i love the history too - i have it in my blood
    best of luck

    Tasha

  • Warrior7
    October 13, 2008

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    Fantastic poem here, loads of awesome imagery and just a great poem to read. The picture you have up there is perfect.


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    This is an excellent write full of Love and Emotion.
    Enjoyed the picture certainly set the theme for the poem good job good luck in the contest.
    ED.


  • countrybabe gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    Awesome

    This is awesome...I love the Native American people and the way they live. Well done and good luck in the contest.

    Countrybabe


  • FifthDove
    October 11, 2008

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    This poem makes me want to be in that place wearing thos moccasins and riding your painted horse. I very much relate to your words as you know. Best wishes always Dove


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    October 10, 2008

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    This is really beautiful. I can see why you entered it in this contest. Good luck in the judging.

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