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Life goes on (pixiku)

things happen
but thank God
life goes on

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My first pixiku. I hope it's a lot better than I think it is lol!
Written April 17th, 2006

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  • Mother Angst
    May 15, 2006
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    AMEN!!!


  • SEA angel gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Very good!

    This would also qualify as a contemporary Senryu. However, when a Haiku or Senryu is born while writing a Pixiku that is fine as Pixiku is all encompassing. Pixiku is the Wild Child of Haiku and Senryu and just loves to show off it's grandbaby Haiku and Senryu poems that natrually pop out sometimes, like yours did, while writing a Pixiku. This is very good.

    Since, as a rule, capital letters are not allowed at the beginning of each line to a purest Senryu or Haiku writer this is 100% Pixiku...the wild child of Haiku and Senryu.
    Edited on Apr 17, 9:59 p.m. because ''.


  • FifthDove
    April 17, 2006
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    Amen!


  • XxtoughtimesxX
    April 17, 2006
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    well god there for everything that you do and i liked it for being wat it is and how short it is ....
    XCayceeX

  • SurrenderMyHeart
    April 17, 2006
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    pretty good for being a short one... life is too short

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