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~Fluttering Hearts~

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You've given me purpose to live today
The power to face tomorrow
As I have lived beyond yesterday
I'm erasing tears of sorrow
 
Once upon my broken, shattered heart
You sent love to my weary soul
Weaving beautifully, angelic art
Encouraging, mending me whole
 
Now as you know, your love's heavenly sent
And I'm embracing it my dear
For in my thoughts, you're where I went
To express my love so sincere
 
So let me be the eyes you're beholding
Take me to a place, far on high
Shower with love, forever unfolding
As we become one, you and I

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Thanks for reading our poetry, much love, ~T & T~
Written April 17th, 2006

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  • Hope2MakeIt
    April 25, 2006
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    this is a very beautiful write here. your words meld together where it is impossible to tell who wrote what. great job. thank you for allowing me to read this. hope


  • Stardust-luvr
    April 24, 2006
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    A beautiful write indeed and though I have read and reread this soooo many times as well as many others lately without cooment -why idk. But after my past weekend and sad writes this stanza helps me realize i need to heal my salty tears and move on no matter how much time it will take:

    You've given me purpose to live today
    The power to face tomorrow
    As I have lived beyond yesterday
    I'm erasing tears of sorrow

    Thank you dearly Timothy and Tammy! xxx


  • Miss Splenda
    April 23, 2006
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    Wonderfully romantic, and with excellent flow and rhyme, as always. I'm so happy I got to read this. Keep spreading smiles all over AP.

    Splenda


  • djmadturk
    April 21, 2006
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    Congratulations! nicely done...


  • irene plunkett
    April 21, 2006
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    this is a beautiful piece of work and i liked the way u used describtive words. love irene ya lil sis xxxxx


  • Tweedle Dee
    April 19, 2006
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    FANTABULOUS!!!

    THAT WAS SOOO AWESOME!!! was it about god or what? well bibi ttyl aim me!


  • April 19, 2006
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    this is very soothing and inspirational a nice piece of work.


  • April 18, 2006
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    AWWW!!!!

    awww me thinks i am going to cry. very well written you have away with words.

  • Blue Ice Angle 420
    April 18, 2006
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    I enjoyed this poem keep it up!


  • Whispering Winds
    April 18, 2006
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    Thanks Kyle for reading me and Timothy.
    And I hope you return to read us in the future.
    How are you doing my dear friend.
    Much love to you,
    tammy


  • April 18, 2006
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    keeper

    Yeah, ok, you guys got skillz!! Bery nice with a good rythem and design. It isn't totally mathmatical but then again what GOOD poetry is? REALLLY GOOD JOB... Kyle sees, and Kyle likes.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 18, 2006
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    Thanks for reading me and your day<<< I think and hope you meant Dad...silly as@

  • Whispering Winds
    April 18, 2006
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    Thank you Timmy for reading me and your day.
    I am happy that you enjoyed it.

    Much love to you always,
    Tammy


  • poeticpieces
    April 18, 2006
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    Excellent Collab!

    excellent job you two, thanks for sharing your lovely, poetic hearts, keep up the great works, I love yas daddio~

    lil Tim~


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    April 18, 2006
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    greeeeeeat

    another great one but ran out of applauses lol used them all on you ..!!!


  • Wandika gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Sounding very promising my friend. Look forward to more upbeat poetry from you.


  • yahokay389
    April 17, 2006
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    Excellent

    I liked it, especially the part about living through yesterday. Good job... isn't love awesome?


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks for your visit, I'm honoured you read this, and you think it's beautiful!


  • Faerie Me
    April 17, 2006
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    great job! very beautiful. thanks for bringing us here to check it out!
    Dana

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    As always this is beautifully done.


  • gullionmar
    April 17, 2006
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    wonderful job very well written keep up the good work


  • Ramona Wright
    April 17, 2006
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    Aww thats what I love to hear. Love ending peacfully. Not in tradegy like every other poem i read or write. Its very cute. Wonderfull job i may say.

    <3

    Samantha


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Sentiments well expressed in these lines- so delightfully sincere and filled with love. Easy to read and understand.


  • Prolific Poetess
    April 17, 2006
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    this is so beautiful and powerful

    my favorite line was "Weaving beautifully, angelic art"


  • Fallen Hard
    April 17, 2006
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    love it

    This is really sweet! I like this alot!
    Fallen Hard~


  • Cherokee
    April 17, 2006
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    That was pretty. It's nice to be inspired by someone who has shown you love. It's amazing how love can lift a person.


  • XxtoughtimesxX
    April 17, 2006
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    i though i was going to cry when i was reading this .......and i did i really like your work
    XCayceeX

  • Whispering Winds
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks so much Vilanger, for your comment. I always love hearing from you. I am glad you enjoyed the read.

    Take care,
    Tammy & Timothy

  • AloneNBroken
    April 17, 2006
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    Not bad at all, I liked it, ya rhyme scheme was on n everything, good write, I'll probably be reading more, keep writing
    take care
    100

  • brokenheartedsecret
    April 17, 2006
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    This poem is so sweet... I think that it is very romantic and sweet in a very mature yet youthful way.... I really enjoyed reading it... Good Job!


  • gentle breeze
    April 17, 2006
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    this is really, really nice. the emotion in this poem is brought out beautifully. it holds you with strength right until the end.


  • ChristopherMatsen
    April 17, 2006
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    I liked this line the best, "Weaving beautifully, angelic art" good write


  • SweetNSinister
    April 17, 2006
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    wow this poem almost made me cry good job!

  • OurxBeginning
    April 17, 2006
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    Wow..this is amazing and I think everyone wishes for this kind of love. I loved the rhyming and you two did an amazing job on this. Awesome work and keep it up.

    ~Morbid[♥]


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    April 17, 2006
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    Whoa... This sounds like an incredible sort of love, and it reminded me of one of my own poems about the one I love with all of my heart. I wish you the best in your future with this person. May your life together be filled with much love and laughter. Great work, and take care!

    God Bless,
    Laura xo


  • Jacinta Lee
    April 17, 2006
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    Wow, you have so much talent... I know I've only read a few of your poems but all of these have amazed me so much. They are all so beautiful. Great work on this

    ~Jacinta


  • sanmdr
    April 17, 2006
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    good write .. in lovely words .. with good flow


  • Quetzalcoatl
    April 17, 2006
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    wow... this was beautiful. I'm jealous, both of the feeling and of your poetic ability, congrats on both! I like the title too... fluttering hearts, kinda reminds me of what life's about... that might not make too much sense to you, but.,.. uh, yeah, it does to me soo... i guess I'll leave now. lol. great write though


  • worldswonder88
    April 17, 2006
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    that was very well written, put together nicely. You did such a good job with expressing the emotion of love in this poem, if you got the time please check out my poem, Bring me to life, thanks. ~Holly


  • Frodofan silver member
    April 17, 2006
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    What a beautiful, sensual, delicate, loving piece! It reminded me very very much of my boyfriend. So nicely put. I enjoyed it! Keep it up.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks Yvonne! Keep smiling!


  • smiley
    April 17, 2006
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    You two have done an awesome job... I could really feel the emotions..

    Yvonne


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    I appreciate your kind words~

    Peace Jack, laters!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks Jamie~

  • first force
    April 17, 2006
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    wonderfull poem thanks for the read..you have talent ..I will look at more of your work...Jack


  • lost-and-confused
    April 17, 2006
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    aww.. this is really sweet! I really like it! ~Jamie


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks so much for your kind words, much love, and peace, Timothy & Tammy~


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    April 17, 2006
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    Love is the great healer of many things. This poem speaks to that healing love that comes when one feels forsaken and lost to it. Just when one stops looking, it finds us, like sun after a shower, peeking through dark clouds. it warms us.
    Beautiful collaboration.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    ~sigh~ Much Tammy~

  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks my dear sis, love the new name as well, if I did not tell ya yet, sorry, big and thanks for your support!

  • Whispering Winds
    April 17, 2006
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    I love it!!!!!

    Come, take my hand, my love
    Carry me far away from here
    Show me what dreams are made of
    As you, I'll always keep near

    Love me today, for our love is true
    Hold me close, never letting go
    For you have painted my gray skies blue
    My love for you forever grows

    Thanks for yet another touch of your heart
    Remember it is you, I truly adore
    Though many miles keeps our hearts apart
    I will be here loving you, forevermore


    Thanks for writing this with me Timothy.
    You so wonderful, and I adore your heart.

    Much love always,
    Tammy




  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks Kaz..


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 17, 2006
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    this is a very good write from the two of you. not surprising in the least. congratulations on the job well done. vilanger


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks Sandy, love ya hun, peace..

  • Kazmira
    April 17, 2006
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    There's that true love connection defined so eloquently! A beautiful verse engraved for the Hallmark fame! Cheers Kaz.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks so much, we appreciate ya!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    April 17, 2006
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    Beautifully, beautifully written, my friends! You two shine like a diamond with this write and I very much enjoyed reading this! Love to both, Sandy

  • Blended Souls
    April 17, 2006
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    How very very beautiful this is! We found this to be quite exquisite! Bravo, poet friends! May the beauty of your pens shine forevermore!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thanks, we try!


  • Jaded Eloquence
    April 17, 2006
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    This was very sweet. Nice job.

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