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as it all  falls fast
ill watch you cry
I've stained u world
with my lies
you wont wake up
I've blinded you
by now
I'm your greatest fear
it wont be long now
it hangs by a string
its about to fall
but you cant save it cause in your
heart you know you caused it all
and with my lies
and with my pain
you know that
truly your the one
to blame

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it suxs and makes no since but i need to update this thing
Written April 17th, 2006

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  • myselfinthemaking
    April 18, 2006
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    It doesn't make sense, and yet it does, in some weird way. I dunno how to explain it, but it's not all that bad. At least you updated.