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Children of the Woods

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Within its soft breezes
and graceful branches,
the forest held many secrets.

It was enchanting to be
in the midst of such beauty,
yet, travelling the hidden pathways
a certain sadness whispered to me.

I heard the hushed voices
telling of the children,
left in the forest,
unwanted by their parents.
The tall pines spoke
of caring for the babies.
Nurturing and comforting
with such tenderness and love.
Though the babies didn't survive long,
their last hours of life

were made peaceful by the pines.

 

 

If you listen carefully
the many spirits of these children
can be heard and felt
as you walk in the forest.
The pine trees shed their tears
to this very day.
Thick and sticky they weep

seeping out of the bark,
perpetually shed for the lost children.

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  • ArchOblivion
    September 7, 2008

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    fantastic. Very beautiful and hauntingly sad, i could definitely see this in a fantasy book somewhere. A good tale well told. Thanks for your entry and good luck.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    May 3, 2006
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    Thank you AngelicMistress, for your kind and encouraging words. I always appreciate you taking the time to read my poems.

    etherealforu


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    May 3, 2006
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    Beautifully written!!!!! :F


    Jeannette:

    Your art never ceases to amaze me, for you write with such feeling and emotion, as well as beauty.....

    I thank you for sharing your words and feelings with me on this site and ask you to keep up the good work, for you do this very well.....

    Be blessed with love and light.....
    As always your friend,
    AngelicMistress


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 23, 2006
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    Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly on this poem. The picture was very interesting, and it was a challenge to write a poem for it. I enjoyed this contest.

    etherealforu


  • debsdelight
    April 23, 2006
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    A very deep sad write, that's good To think that the lost children are being nurtured by mother nature, safe for just a short time as death takes the babes! A wonderful entry. Best of luck in my contest. God Bless. Debs x


  • Theater Of Dreams
    April 19, 2006
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    You are very welcome.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 19, 2006
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    Thank you for reading this one James. I am happy it gave you a little peace. I really try to believe that miracles are possible. Thanks for you kind words.

    etherealforu


  • Theater Of Dreams
    April 18, 2006
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    Unique, Outstanding.

    Thank you for sharing it. I like it, simply because it gave me a little peace...thinking such a miracle might be...just wonderful.
    Hugs!

    -James.-


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 18, 2006
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    Thank you for reading and commenting on this poem. I am happy you enjoyed reading it.

    etherealforu


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 18, 2006
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    Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly on this poem. I am happy you enjoyed reading it.

    etherealforu


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    nicely penned

    very good job on this write, poem matches the picture perfectly.it is an interesting picture to say the least. Liked this inded good luck in the contest,
    God Bless
    Victoria


  • superstition
    April 17, 2006
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    This poem is absolutely stunning. I could say a whole lot, but it all sums up my first sentence. This just moved me. Such a beautiful piece, yet such a sad subject.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thank you for reading and commenting on this poem. I am happy you enjoyed reading it.

    etherealforu


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I am happy you enjoyed reading this one.

    etherealforu


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thank you for reading and commenting on this poem grannyeri. I am glad you enjoyed my interpretation. It was a very interesting picture.

    etherealforu


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    excellent! very well written, this poem tells a wonderful story (if not somewhat tragic lol) The poem matches the picture perfectly. Well done!
    Rory


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Thank you for reading this one Sis. I appreciate your comments, as I value your opinion. Thanks for the good wishes too.

    etherealforu


  • Ink Shadow
    April 17, 2006
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    Beautifully poetized story...

    D


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 17, 2006
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    Very creative interpretation of this picture. Seems to have been drawn just for the poem. Easy to read and understand.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 17, 2006
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    you did a very good job on this write. it is an interesting picture to say the least. i want to wish you the best of luck in this contest. vilanger

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