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Fatal Attraction

Violation
              Desecration
 p.e.n.e.t.r.a.t.i.o.n.

We are Frantic-tock
                   tick
                      tock

Clock .stops.
 Time s.tops.

                     Nothing else matters (only us)

I want to take in every part of your body
                I pant
                     breathe
                                "I lo v.e  yo-u"

All I get is "oh my god"
                    (so flawed)

       This is one Fatal Attraction;
                    Your Distraction
You're an addiction
           & {{pant}} O..h ..Baabyy.
                           I'm addicted.

Author notes

Still going with that. So many words floating through my head today... just putting them down on (cyber)paper I suppose
Written April 17th, 2006

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  • CapturedMoon
    May 22, 2007

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    Omg. I just reread this.
    Amazing.
    Absoluetly amazing.

    I can relate soooo well to this right now.


  • MetalHouse III
    May 7, 2006
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    Wow this is really great! Your amazing!!
    The title reminds me of one of my poems called got you back...
    wow

    mike

  • CapturedMoon
    April 21, 2006
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    Again, this is great.
    I love your work.
    It has a certain presence about it if you know what I mean.
    It just makes you feel.
    Which is what poetry is ment to do.
    Great write.
    ~Carla.