I will tell you the truth,
The confessions of my heart
Each time i saw you,
The pain grew immensely
Your gaze cut through my heart
Suffocated my soul
I shed tears and tears
For your touch i craved
To hear your voice
Those words 'i need you'
The days grew long and cold
The air i breathed, crisp and untouched
Anything said about you
Was just another knife in my heart
Bleeding, breathing, breathless
I will never know how you feel
But forever i sit here
Knowing i will never have you again...
Author notes
well, this is the start of the poems i'm going to write about my life. this one is about my ex, surprise!! lol, yeah...well leave me a comment 
Written April 17th, 2006
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poogey babe, dis is so sad. it HELL FRIGGIN AWESUM but sad
I luv it!!!!!!!!! Love u and miss u lots
Love phoebe -
yealsh i agree with katezwen here , very deepeth!!!!!!!!!! and just like kate i'm sure your ex and you shall become friends again.. if it was an ex awsome write here!
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Cool, a series about life. Hmm.. An ex. My last ex is one of my best friends now. I liked this piece, it was very deep.
Confusicus -
Great choice of words....this was a great write!!
Good form and flow....
Good job!!
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