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Blue Eyes

I look into a sea of blue
Your eyes so mesmerize
It makes my heart a flutter
To know I see no lies

My heart can stand another you
You've knocked me off my feet
Drawn into a field of blue
My heart just skipped a beat

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To Blue eyed Jamie For being there, From Emotions of An American Man
Written April 16th, 2006

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  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    November 30, 2006

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    Beautiful

    This poem is truly beautiful. It has a wonderful flow to it, like water over pebbles.

    You have painted a beautiful picture of this person in your life.

    Rosemary


  • Ellis gold member
    April 19, 2006
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    Excellent Writing

    Terrific poem. This is interesting in that one of my first poems written years ago (I'm 64) was "Purple Blue"

    Beautiful girl in purple blue
    I lift my eyes and turn to you
    My heart goes up, up, heaven sings
    God is love, and it's love God brings
    Down, down from heaven on angel's wings
    Come warmth and joy till my heart rings
    I lift my eyes and turn to you
    Beautiful girl in purple blue

    I have it memorized; just typed it from memory. --Ellis

  • raven69
    April 18, 2006
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    great job

    u did a good job on this poem it reminds me of my boyfriend.u did a good job keep up the good work.