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Black Angel

black angel
terminate fear and program your sins
i promise to be your
everything youll ever desire
anything youll ever wanna hate
ill slit your wrists at five minutes to midnight
make you wait till theres nothing left
im done with the exit sign
technicalities to make our lives for free
do it because you think i can
run it dark to where it's perfect
three hundred thirty and counting in hex
supposed to be holding forever, but faking
lies into programmed eyes that walk the road with their creations
too artifical to fight the feelings
too concrete to find a meaning
i still see you through pitch black rooms
bleeding your vanity
but you said you wouldnt cry
against the eyes of outside i cant find but your shadow
if i see my life in gigabytes
your all and nothing but a few lines of my code

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im back. with poems. and boredness.
Written April 16th, 2006

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  • Fallen-Phases
    August 26, 2008
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    amazing poem, i really liked this!
    beautiful flow and passion
    best of luck
    ~Mlg