Friendship
Friendship is the elixir of life.
It is a spring…
That keeps the fountain of happiness flowing.
As time passes…
It is a bud…
That blooms into a flower,
Its essence wafts through the air,
And its rich aroma…
Holds the souls together.
It is a treasure…
That needs to be cherished with passion,
For a lifetime.
It is a mystical paradise of ecstasy.
It is a blessing…
That god showers down on us,
And its golden rays…
Enrich our lives.
It is a light…
That true friends…
Spray on each other…
With love, trust, knowledge.
It is a ship…
Filled with true friends…
As they sail…
In the sea of life,
And weather the storm,
And help each other…
To come out of adversity.
True friends are gems…
That glisten and shine,
And that divine glow…
Gets brighter and brighter…
Each passing moment…
And its beauty enamored in time.
love n regards,
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Written April 16th, 2006
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good write .. in warm words
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Wow this is really good. It's really long greeting card material. I don't mean that to be insulting either. I spend hours reading greeting cards.
Great job.
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You obviously think a lot of your friends and they must think a lot of you. You should let them all read this. Have a Happy Easter!
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You see I like this poem. True friends are exactly like how you described them. But friends don't always last forever.. I just suddenly got some inspiration for a new poem.
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This is so full with wonderful allusions. I especially love >>As time passes…
It is a bud…
That blooms into a flower,
Its essence wafts through the air,
And its rich aroma…
Holds the souls together.
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Overall, a very good job!
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I like it, though true friends are sometimes hard to find, you may think you have one but then they'll turn their back on you after 6 years.
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This is pretty good. I wanted to write a poem about friendship once, but couldn't really find an angle. You're very positive though - I was struggling with mine because I wanted to mention something about how it's not always easy, and a true frienship won't always be easy, but I couldn't get it together. Good job though - very positive and some good imagery - not sure how necessary all the "..." are but hey! Bench
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