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Let them know

do you love me?!?!?
please let me know....
because I'm siting here,
all alone.
with no one to love,
or hold tight!
I'm not going to make it
through the night!

you're letting me DIE!
I thought u cared...
but now I see....
you didn't even dare.
you're just like THEM
you are all pretend,
so I will go...
I'll just end.....




if you love someone let them know, before it's too late!

Author notes

this is about a guy that i thougt i liked, but it turns out that he only likes me as a friend! :'( :'( :'( :'(  <3
Written April 15th, 2006

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  • Blinde Liebe
    June 5, 2006
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    awwwww...thank you! and i will! same to ya!
    ~Casey~


  • Flying-Flamingo13
    June 5, 2006
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    It was a great poem!!!! You expressed it with such passion...it would have been difficult to miss. I liked how you made it rhyme. It also flowed wonderfully! You did a great job!!! I can deffidently relate to this one!! Keep writing poetry!!!
    Haley

  • Blinde Liebe
    April 16, 2006
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    awwwwwwwwwww! thanks!
    <3 Casey <3


  • MoonlightBeam
    April 16, 2006
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    I'm sorry...but I love this poem. I agree if you do like someone don't hold it in...

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 15, 2006
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    It's okay.
    love ya too.

  • Blinde Liebe
    April 15, 2006
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    lol, thanks...srry...but that cracks me up! "what a heel..." srry again! thanks again(how many times can i say "again"???) lol
    love ya!
    <3 Casey <3

  • Blinde Liebe
    April 15, 2006
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    aww! thanks! yeah, i won't but he's never goina like me cuz HIS BROTHER LIKES ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ewwwwwwwww...i like HATE his brother...well 1 og them that is...but still thanks!
    <3 Casey <3

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 15, 2006
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    What a heel this guy sounds like.
    Thanks for sharing this. Casey. Sorry things haven't worked out between you.
    Brian


  • nOva-
    April 15, 2006
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    I think we can all relate to this one. Great job Casey!! Nice rhyming too!! I loved this because you expressed it so..freely. Dont give up hope tho! Just remember,,,this it what makes the real thing all the more meaningful
    Luv,

    ~sui generis777~

  • Blinde Liebe
    April 15, 2006
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    awww thanks u! and thanks for the applaud!!!!!!!!! sorry about your friend...thansk again!
    <3 Casey <3


  • Angels Requiem
    April 15, 2006
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    AH man, this is very depressign to me, becuase that's happened to em before, only it was a girl I liked, and she only wanted me as a friend so I can realte to this, but the overall poem was incredible I ove the rhyme scheme, and your use of words.
    Great Write.

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