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Touch Of Love

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Touch Of Love

When someone says, they'll  forever be there
No storm, nor death, can cease their honest soul
A promise made with purest intentions
Is filled without demands or control

Let it be known, Love's not an emotion
For the truth remains in the heart of youth
And heaven may lead you to what Love is
Commitment, communication, and truth

Love comforts hearts, unconditionally
For it mends the universe together
No time, nor place, can erase Love's embrace
As True Love is our healer forever

Love is flawless, in all its perfection
Even though we lack to grasp it all here
One day we shall climb, the divine stairway
Until then, we jot our thoughts and compare

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Thanks for reading me, I appreciate ya! Much love, Timothy
Written April 15th, 2006

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  • siahaan
    October 18
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    I've missed your Poems


  • Jalalbad gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    wow! I just said love is not an emotion, but its a spirit the other day... From that someone got the understanding of the famous trio, Father , Son, Holy Ghost. Your in touch with God poeticweaver, Thank you for allowing me to read this


  • crystallady silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    My favorite

    Tim, What I love about your work is your absolutely open and loving heart. I am thrilled you have found your heart's love and she is so beautiful. This piece is so beautiful in it's recognition that the essence of love is pure and perfect, and we - here on earth can seek it, yet not fully achieve that perfection until we are pure spirit. Thank you for your jotting and your thoughts! And thank you again for your response to my new voice. Crystallady


    • poeticweaver gold member
      December 11, 2008
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      Wow,

      This is an old one, thanks for reading, and I appreciate you bringing back to life.

      Peace, Timothy

  • cindy4
    September 10, 2008
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    Great write.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    March 23, 2008

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    Awesome and beautifully written
    Tim! Thanks a lot for posting this
    poem here. It is all of the things
    that love is inside and out. I hope
    that you are well and Happy Easter
    to you bro! Take care!




    Jeremy0826


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    April 18, 2006
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    beautiful...!!

    beautiful...!!


  • smiley
    April 16, 2006
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    You have nailed it on the head... Love has no boundaries... True love last forever no matter what..... this stanza says it all:
    Love comforts hearts, unconditionally
    For it mends the universe together
    No time, nor place, can erase Love's embrace
    As True Love is our healer forever


    Yvonne
    Happy Easter to you and your family.


  • crivanea silver member
    April 15, 2006
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    lol...u know..i suck at romantic poem..but if i ever need a love poem on a gift card..u'll be the first i'll ask...lol..beautiful...wonderfully done!


  • Stardust-luvr
    April 15, 2006
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    AWESOME

    Our love and friendship is and will forever be unconditional just as all friendships and all forms of love should be.
    Love comforts hearts, unconditionally
    For it mends the universe together
    No time, nor place, can erase Love's embrace
    As True Love is our healer forever
    One of my fav stanzas and one that hits so close to my heart from when we talk. I am here and it makes me think of my favourite quote:
    If you're alone, I'll be your shadow. If you want to cry, I'll be your shoulder. If you want a hug, I'll be your pillow. If you need to be happy, I'll be your smile. But anytime you need a friend, I'll just be me. ~Author Unknown

    I Love and miss you with all my heart. Having met you on AP has been one of my greatest accomplishments in my life as you are a wonderful and remarkable man in every way. xxxxxxxxx


  • neverontime
    April 15, 2006
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    Wow! Timothy, this is a beautiful inspirational write about genuine, pure love. I applaud you for this. What a wonderful, insightful poem. So true, that we don't know the completeness of love, until we climb that divine stairway. A most beautiful write, in all perfection. You have given a very explicit description of what love means to you. This is truly, a Splendid Masterpiece! I won't wish you luck in this contest, because with a poem like this, you don't need luck! Susan


  • Roseleaf
    April 15, 2006
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    another beautiful poem i reallyy like the following its so very true..

    Love is flawless, in all its perfection
    Even though we lack to grasp it all here
    One day we shall climb, the divine stairway
    Until then, we jot our thoughts and compare
    excellent


    ~~~Pauline
    Hope you are having a very happy Easter


  • Dream Weaver
    April 15, 2006
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    Bravo! Rendered me speechless


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 15, 2006
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    Love is flawless, in all its perfection
    Even though we lack to grasp it all here
    One day we shall climb, the divine stairway
    Until then, we jot our thoughts and compare

    and how i so look forward to this day. you have done an awesome job in writing this one. does not surprise me in the least little bit.


  • heavensdesires
    April 15, 2006
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    Beautiful inspiration

    Let it be known, Love's not an emotion
    For the truth remains in the heart of youth
    And heaven may lead you to what Love is
    Commitment, communication, and truth

    Love comforts hearts, unconditionally
    For it mends the universe together
    No time, nor place, can erase Love's embrace
    As True Love is our healer forever

    May you always have that true love to heal Timothy
    with the weavings of your soul and petals flowering your
    footsteps.
    Affectionately,
    Carissa


  • sanmdr
    April 15, 2006
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    good write .. good flow of words and emotions
    Edited on Apr 15, 1:49 p.m. because ''.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    April 15, 2006
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    This is beautiful Timothy and so very true, its also something that not many people ever seem to realize and its often taken for granted. Your heart is a beautiful thing and your soul shines always - wonderful honey and so full of truth.


  • Cupcrazy
    April 15, 2006
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    Beautifully written with such emotion, loved the thoughts and the depth of feeling. The flow and form were excelent. Great job! Bunny

  • Mickie27
    April 15, 2006
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    I loved the way you begun this write, When someone says, they'll forever be there
    No storm, nor death, can cease their honest soul
    This gets the attention of the reader immediately the first 2 lines really get you. I really really liked the poem a lot. Keep writing you have a talent.


  • lonely and free
    April 15, 2006
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    what a marvellous way to write about love... it is a power that is constant and free, if we are lucky we tap into it for a short while, but it is always there and always warm.. beautiful beautiful poem from a loving heart x


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    April 15, 2006
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    Awwwww, that is beautiful! Love is such an incredible thing, and we should never take it for granted. Best of luck to you in Love, now and always. Take care, my friend!


  • Windworder gold member
    April 15, 2006
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    Somebody finally go this right! Love is not an emotion, it a commitment for life of grace and forgiveness. As always beautiful wording on a background of hope.


  • Wandika gold member
    April 15, 2006
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    Very nice Timothy. Hope you are feeling better.

    Jim


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 15, 2006
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    Thanks!

    Anything for you, and believe me, to enter the way I've been feeling, that's Love, lol... Thanks for reading sis, peace!

    -Timothy


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    April 15, 2006
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    Sweetie, this is simply breath-taking!
    I have no words to tell you how this touched my heart; I simply am at a loss....
    Wow!
    See darlin', I told you you would step up to the challenge! You blew me away!
    Love ya,
    Your forever and always loving sister

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