I can see the jealousy,
In my own green eyes,
The face of the girl,
I violently dispise,
Shes done nothing to me,
Yet her presence still burns,
Because shes the girl,
That he desperatly yearns,
I know that he's mine,
That doesnt stop the pain,
Of knowing his love,
Lies with her all the same,
All that i want,
Is for him to want me,
Is that too much to ask?
Guess i'll wait and see.
Author notes
I am well aware that this is half of an old poem, copy-pasted onto a new sheet of paper. However, currently, it just seems sum up a fairly large part of my life so i thought id re-post the bastard, see if it had any effect. 
Written April 15th, 2006
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nothing makes sense these days, but hey you're right ona, you're all just human and things go on in life, anyway....hope everything gets sorted. l8az love always sky xxx
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Yes, it was, in a twisted, un-true, "im feeling un-loved" kinda way. Hmm, that doesnt make much sence, but then again, what does these days?
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*wonders if this has anything to do with him....thinks for a second, then assumes it doesn't and carries on reading poetry.* Correct me if i'm wrong. MRV
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Its an old poem, that didnt mean anything when i wrote it, and doesnt mean anything now. Yes, it was about you, and yes, you are wrong. I am incredibly happy and we are all human. Iona
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Amy, why do you ALWAYS have to be right? But yes, i know all of that, i was just reading over alot of my old stuff and wondered why i wrote that one to begin with. It just seemed more appropriate now than back then. Anyway, thanks for the comment and hope Holland was heel goed xxx
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Hey there, This is a really good poem and its full of raw emotion! I'm guessin that this could be about me and i would be glad to hear that im wrong! I just want to say no hard feelings hey! And i hope that your happy! I know i majorly over reacted but ahh well i'm only human! Lots of love Dazz please post back
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He DOES love you. And not her. Otherwise he wouldn't be with you. Another thing is, it's human nature to like more than one person, but part of a relationship is accepting that your partner has those feelings, and the mutual trust of knowing they won't act on them, because they are with YOU.
Keep writing, and relax!
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Heh I have done that! sometimes it our older work that sums up more then anything new that we spill out. Jelousy is an evil monster, it can wound kill and tear apart people. be careful not to let it consume you I wish you the best.
xoxox
Celeste
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