Let me crumble into Your hands
Let me fall apart at Your feet
Help me stop the pain
Help me stop the suffering
I can't do it alone
I can't cope by myself
I need to be broken before You
I need Your arms around me
Let me crumble into Your hands
Take away my pain
You say You let us suffer a while
Is my while not over?
Take away my tears
Take away the memories
Breathe new life into me
Breathe new hope into me
Let me crumble before You
Let me have a new life
Use me for the things You have planned
Use me for the rest of my life
Just let me crumble...
Author notes
Written on 24th February 2003 @ 23:16 GMT
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A contest entry
- Dear God by cookie crumbs.
300 points, ended December 29, 2005, 18 entries
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Very wonderful and creative yet discriptive.
Nice write and good luck!
~Brooke -
This is such an awesome poem. I really love this poem. It is really great. I love the honesty and the fact that you are pouring out your heart here. Great job.
Rivkah -
Amen
This almost seemed like you were in prayer as you wrote this poem and as I read... I prayed along with you for us both. That we might crumble through the our hour glass of pain to be turned over to hours of healing and happiness the rest of our lives. That our lives might be shining examples of Him henceforth and forevermore. Amen and Amen
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Very nice work on this write. You just poured out your heart to our Lord and saviour with a heartfelt plea. I've felt much the same way at times. Anway, well done ! Good Luck!
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Exactly what I wanted thanks for sharing this I love it.
Good LUck
Mary -
excellent
Beautiful write!!! Wonderful poem about hope and cry for help. You did a great job in conveying this message. Good luck in the contest. BRAVO -
I love this!! It is how I feel at times. This is amazing. You just spoke your heart to the Lord. You could have re wrote this poem and added it. And then after the contest deleted it. lol
God Bless
~Ashley~ -
wow I LOVE this...it's very unique and good. I LOVE the imagry in it and it's very moving/deep.
Keep it up and thanks for sharing.
Melissa -
How beautiful! This really works for what I've been looking for. I have felt like this before, And this poem describes the feeling phenomenally. Thank you for entering and following the rules!
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Uplifting
During the long walk down God's narrow path, there are many times when we feel tired and wish He would just pick us up tenderly. I find that He always does this, either in an uplifting word from another or suddenly our witnessing brings one to Him and He allows us to see it; for most of the time we merely plant the seeds, never seeing the results.
This is beautifully written and, hopefully will lead another to our awesome Lord. Good luck in the contest.
Love and hugs, BonnieQ
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this was just amamzing, I really loved this, I am glad you entered my contest, good luck now. And I look foward of seeing some comments from you...
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very powerful
This piece was very powerful, I loved this one. Keep up the good work and please stop again... -
This was quite powerful... it's something I've heard very often... show humility before the Lord and learn to be humble in servitude to Him. I find it particularly hard to do myself, so I value it when I see it in others, because I know how hard it is. This was a very nice write.
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well Laura this is a powerful write and I wish you all the luck in the contest.... freda
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Hi,
I feel that this was such a great write, you have done a fantastic job well.
Best of wishes to you and yours
Blue moon -
this makes me think of living... begging to live with such powerful words that linger after it's read
great job Laura
billy
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this is a very powerful outcry to your creator... i haven't ever seen anything like it and it's very moving... keep up the great work! best of luck!
)O( neuentag -
While this is a good poem, it doesn't fit what I'm looking for. This is a personal prayer from you to Jesus.
Ray -
woah! This is AMAZING! For some reason this makes me think of suicide, i dont know why, its kinda like, let my life be over and let me have a perfect one in heaven. i dont know, thats just what i kept thinking! This is an amazing poem tho, great job!
~Jordie
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