Darling I don’t know why but you move me
You touch me in a place, that I don’t know
I’ve been getting jitters, and my tongue is all tied up
My dreams are filled with memories of you
What is it about you, I don’t know
Your caress, your kisses, or your loving soul
I do know now that I love you
And that comes from the bottom of this man's heart
So if you can find it in your heart to love me
And spend the rest of your life here by my side
Please put this glowing stone on your finger
And say that you would love to be my bride
Author notes
THe original poem, GOne are the red eyes, This is the way I see myself proposing to a very special lady one day, I be available and hopefully she will say yes.
Written April 15th, 2006
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Great
I'm sure you will find the love of your life one day. She might be right under your nose now. Never know. Good job on this one
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Beautiful
How many words are there to state just how beautiful this poem is.
Beautiful: admirable, alluring, angelic, appealing, beauteous, bewitching, charming, classy, comely, cute, dazzling, delicate, delightful, divine, elegant, enticing, excellent, exquisite, fair, fascinating, fine, foxy*, good-looking, gorgeous, graceful, grand, handsome, ideal, lovely, magnificent, marvelous, nice, pleasing, pretty, pulchritudinous, radiant, ravishing, refined, resplendent, shapely, sightly, splendid, statuesque, stunning, sublime, superb, symmetrical, taking, well-formed, wonderful.......
I think that is about it.
Rosemary -
a most touching and romantic proposal
with sincere and very moving words.
written with tenderness and a sprinkle
of whymsy; this is a wonderfully written
poem and simply delightful to read~~
lynn -
Romance in rhyme
Lovely and romantic! Well done, sir. Such a touching proposal within poetry. Your words flow with sincere love from the heart. Thank you for putting this as a feature. My heart flutters. Blessings! Tammy -
A wonderfully written poetic proposal. Such lovely sentiments are betrayed here within thie piece. A pleasure partake in reading. Your heart shince through in every last word. Nicely Done!
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Very beautiful poem. Great proposal. Written very well. Thank you for sharing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Be safe.
Jeannie D
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Excellent Writing
"Your red eyes" kinda throws me. Everything else seems serious. -
A wonderfully romantic proposal...One that a girl dreams of...that makes her weak in the knees. This is so well written and captivating! Your words flow like soft butter - wonderful, smooth and delicious!! Wonderful
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And I answer AS my persona, dear.
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You Do know this was for the Fastasy Rose, LOL I sure your lovely too.
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This is very sweet, and thoughtful. I have to wonder why you think I'm the onefor you...but I do appreciate how sincere you are in your post. We'll see how things go. Thank you for writing this for me.
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