Looking into the wild blue yonder
Wishing I was there
It won’t be long until
I catch that winged prayer
I’ll be back in your arms
And you take me to your lare
I’ll hold you, kiss you, love you
I won't even have a care
Honey I sure miss you
I’ve been gone way to long
The sweet scent of you body
Has faded like a song
Your warm embrace and soft caress
Has never left me blue
I still know you love me
And your love will find me true
Author notes
TO the ladies back Home and all the soldiers heading home to see them, I'll be home soon, From Emotions of an American In Iraq
Written April 15th, 2006
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really good
had to check this out as it has the same title as a song i like by paul weller, i'm glad i did, really good poem this, i can feel the longing in your words, very sincere,
well done,
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Stunning
To start with: line 8 (want should read won't)
Now the for rest. It is a truly emotional poem, expressing your need for love strongly. It is almost heartbreaking to think you have to spend so much time alone.
The whole poem has a beautiful flow to it and I especially love the last line.
Rosemary
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great job!youdid fantastic on this!I would give it a 10 out of 10 if I were a judge for a cotest!It ispires the title to!
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WHAT A LOVELY POEM,YOU WRITE VERY WELL MY FRIEND,KEEP UP THE WONDEFUL WRITING
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Excellent Writing
I applaud your courage and bravery. Great poem. --Ellis
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