If I saw an angel flying
Too close to the ground
I’d reach into the heavens
And try to pull her down
I’d hold her in my arms
If she didn't mind
I kiss her soft and gentle
Oh, I can’t believe this find
It might just be a dream
But dreams they do come true
Not always how you dream them
But I see this dream in you
Author notes
Option 13 and option 4, So many have gotten away, I think I need a bigger net.
Written April 15th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- ~*Many Options!!!!!!!*~ by Flying-Flamingo13.
300 points, ended August 21, 2006, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great
There are angels out there I am married to one
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Just beautiful
You have written a beautiful love poem here. I can only say that you are a true romantic by heart and I can only think that the woman in your life must be very lucky.
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Thanks
No being here I have know one special, Have tried a few times but, The timing is really bad, But that doesn't mean I can't dream of love. 2008 Is my last year maybe then. Thanks for your support.
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I have just thanked you for your comments to my poem "What is Life" I then clicked on Return the Favour and it bought me to this poem of yours. Your comments on my poem and the sentiments in this one enforce the idea that if we really do dream hard enough, then it is possible that we can grasp that something special that is lacking in life. I believe we have to have faith that there is something that will bring the light back into our eyes, something that will put that spring back in our step, something that will once again make us feel wanted, loved and to belong, something that will bring back that spontaneous smile and giggle that comes when we see the fun in things that happen now and then... like smelling the hawthorn blossom after rain, spontaneous laughter on seeing the funny side of a puppy rolling on the floor playing.
For me personally, its the fun things in life that come when we are least expecting it that make it all worth while.
~Katie~
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Merry meet,
Congratulations on winning an Honorable Mention. This was a tough contest. Congratulations again.
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Great job!!! It's short, but sweet and flows wonderfully throughout the whole thing... wonderful poem!!! Thanks for entering!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
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I must say well done ! Such a way of words and a rythimic beat
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You really are a gifted writer and your experiences would be lost if you did not share them. it is nice to know you have something real to share with all of us. RC
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Excellent idea
I had to take a sneak peak before I finshed for the day. It church and planting.
Excellent -
Beautiful - such a lovely write. Great flow and evokes a warm feeling.
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awe such a sweet and tender poem you have written here you definately did manage to radiate some very beautiful feelings throughout this page here - great job!
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Excellent Writing
Beautiful writing. Very enjoyable to read. --Ellis -
This poem speaks volumes about your love and desire for your special someone. Great flow, imagery and rhythm. A very beautiful poem.
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Beautiful and almost bittersweet. Well done.
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Beautiful! Very sweet, loving poem. I think having it dedicated to someone(s) makes this all the better. Your poem is short, but yet still a great poem. I always say that if you can get a poem out in lesser lines, but still obtain the same emotions and effect, I say go for it! And with this poem, you definately did that. Your poem is very simple, but still heart-felt. I might have to read this to my girlfriend later today and see what she thinks. Great job! You know it has to be good if I'm willing to read it to her
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--Tim
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