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Anuptaphobia

Now that you are gone, I'm scared
A thousand needles of loneliness
Pierce my hollow heart
As if a fire in burning away
My soul in which has died away

Now that I am alone, I'm scared
As rejection after rejection my
Seams fray away so violently
I need somewhere there by my side
And now it really don't matter
Which sad pathetic little girl I have
Just as long as
I'm with her

It's like having no reason to live
Lost amongst the millions of care-free
Individuals roaming this sad planet
I only need to be held, told that
Everything will be alright
Cause when I'm alone I feel
I feel as though life just stops

Emptiness is Loneliness

A dream within a dream

Life without someone there
Is life with no reason to live

Author notes

Anuptaphobia- fear of being single

we all fear something in our lives. Being alone scares the fuck outta me. I used two quotes there at the end placed in single lined stanzas the first one is from Smashing Pumpkins and the second one is Edgar Alone Poe. I felt as though they were realevant.
Written April 14th, 2006

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  • Amythest Moonjade
    April 23, 2006
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    Congratulations

    Merry meet,
    Congratulations on winning the Bronze. Your poem was different. Just a thought to pass along...your poem was very hard to read with text color chosen. Lot's of people will not read a poem if they have to highlight it just to read it.....just a thought. Again, congratulations on winning the Bronze.

    Amythest


  • honey bear
    April 22, 2006
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    very good

    an exelent write and it is about a phobia that many people suffer from but will not admit to having,an exelent write, i thought that i had commented on this contest but had not,congratualtions on a well earned cup x