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Loving you

What is love
I'm not sure
I'll ever know
Is it the feeling I get
When your near me
The butterflies in my stomach
When you just look at me
The dryness in my mouth
My heart pounding
Words are caught in my throat
It makes it hard
To show you just how much
You truly mean to me
So I'll use the only way I know how
Maybe this will help
Maybe just maybe
You'll know
I can only wait
And hope
That you'll know
How amazing I think you truly are
How I can't help
But get lost in your eyes
Maybe just maybe
I'll find the words to say
I love you


Author notes

Yeah this was a poem inspierd by my amazing boy friend who I'm falling in love with. Yes tis going from lust to love as he calls it
Comments are appriciated <3
Written April 14th, 2006

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  • melodramatic emo
    May 2, 2006
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    hey this was pretty sweet I liked it alot great work


  • Brokenangels
    April 15, 2006
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    Thanks for the comment it just feels good to get that out of my system. and I'm glad to know some one knows how it feels


  • Brokenangels
    April 15, 2006
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    Thankie Eden

  • SincerelyStephanie
    April 15, 2006
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    That was very well said! I can relate to that!


  • Necromancer Kitten
    April 14, 2006
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    So...Wow

    Wow. This was really good Banana! Just, wow. I think this is one of the best I've read in a while. ^_^ EEEH! So Good! I love how everything just worked together. And, wow.

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