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Talented (for dragonsear)

dragonsear soars on poetry's wings
she never forgets that thoughts are things
talented she is, gifted by the Divine
to use her words to create a new state of mind
dragonsear soars, rising above
bringing smiles and showing love
she's my pet dragon
she's a faithful companion

Author notes

To dragonsear, one of the finest poets I know, and the pet dragon in my AP dynasty.  

allpoetry.com/poets/dragonsear


Written April 14th, 2006

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    April 15, 2006
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    Awesome write...I always wanted a pet dragon...you are lucky...LOL anyway good luck in the contest.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*


  • Pisces Pieces
    April 14, 2006
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    I WANT A DRAGON!! This is so um...sweet? I don't know what a good word would be to compliment a tribute to a dragon. I thought this said alot with it's few words, your pet dragon is so very lucky! Talented and loyal 'owner'


  • April 14, 2006
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    Fire breathing good

    Lucky you, to have such a wonderful pet. Everyone needs a dragon!


  • individuality gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    hehehe a pet dragon breathing fiery poetry
    Spill ink and drink - wink - twist me into the shapely ape of love's nape.

  • Thedragonisgone
    April 14, 2006
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    Magically Delicious!

    I AM HONORED AND FEEL SO LOVED! Thanks so much, sweetie! Promise I won't wilt the flowers with too much heavy breathing... You've been writing some doozies! Thanks for my treats, oh how I love sweets!

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