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another acrostic for freyasfalcon

Freyja bless you, my Asatru brother, for I
realize that you are true,
ever in my service,
you are loyal and devoted.
As none other could understand me, you have,
skald, you wrote "Phoenix" for me,
finally, someone gets me, gets where I'm at,
at last, someone appreciates my strength in struggle.
Love is a word too often misused, but I will use it,
coming from my heart,
of which you have captured with your words,
now I feel whole again.

Author notes

To freyasfalcon, a brilliant poet.... see him at allpoetry.com/poets/freyasfalcon

and be sure to read his poem "Phoenix"....


Written April 14th, 2006

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    April 15, 2006
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    Great write and a great tribute to your slave...hehe. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*


  • -ButterflyCuts-
    April 15, 2006
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    aww thankyou for lighting a smile
    yuour poem is beautiful... im glad he liked it
    thanks so much for enterin
    jess


  • Pisces Pieces
    April 14, 2006
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    AWWWW......well again, a fine tribute to your love. And an acrostic, even better! This also is very sweet! I don't really know what else to say about these tributes to your family/friends, I will try to not be so lame as I read on!


  • April 14, 2006
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    Wonderful!

    Thank you, my love. You have stirred my soul to its very depths.


  • individuality gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    poetry - you have the cutest little poetry
    Spill ink and drink - wink - twist me into the shapely ape of love's nape.


  • wings of an angel
    April 14, 2006
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    Very nice acrostic sis

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