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(to my wife) LadyDragonWolfe

Lovely lady
And the thief of my heart
Do you know
Your smiles make my day

Dancing the spiral dance
Reclaiming the Old Ways
A Witch, one of the Wise
Goddess lives within you
O Fair Maiden, I see your beauty
Not just on the outside but
Within you
Of your spirit, your soul, your
Love for me
For all the Earth
Ever we share a bond, a bond from the great beyond

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To my wife, LadyDragonWolfe, Sarah.      I hope this makes your day, sweetheart.

Help light a smile today......
Written April 14th, 2006

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    April 15, 2006
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    Awesome write..I really like acrostic style writings, and so enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest..

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*


  • -ButterflyCuts-
    April 15, 2006
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    this is so beautiful and lovely...
    i cant wait unti she sees it.. do make sure to send her the link. so she can bes miling fo evermore
    jess


  • April 14, 2006
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    Excellent

    A lovely poem for dear Sarah
    Edited on Apr 14, 9:37 p.m. because ''.


  • individuality gold member
    April 14, 2006
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    Wiggles a smile over yonder for you, a beautiful acrostic poem.
    Spill ink and drink - wink - twist me into the shapely ape of love's nape