I fight the tears with laugh and smile,
Leave me alone for just a while.
Let me cry in peace and quiet,
Save myself from this mental riot.
I fight the tears with jokes and lies,
They don’t see through my disguise.
How can you stand and speak of me,
And wonder why I disagree?
I fight the tears that threaten to flood,
Just like my drops of tainted blood.
Just leave me be in my solitude
Let me battle my inner feud.
I fight the voices in my mind,
Memories and lies now intertwined.
I'm so lost.. What’s fake and what’s real?
All that I know, is that it’s pain I feel.
This is my final pain of the heart,
Never again will you tear me apart.
Ripped at the seams, shattered, without hope,
I'm glad to know that it’s heartbreak I broke.
Author notes
It's been a while since I rhymed so have a poem. It's all forced, except for the last 3 lines, which just flowed form my heart and head effortlessly. <3
Written April 14th, 2006
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Great Work
This Poem flows well,but now that you have overcome the pain think happy thoughts.jacisbac -
I think you wrote me down in this piece..its sooooooooooo good..I wish I had written this...whatever I feel...you wrote it down so well...with all the great rhyming and amazing flow....this could be the best poem I ever read!!! WOW.thanks for writing this!!!!!!!
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Beautiful
I also would never have guess that this piece didn't just come from your heart and straight onto the screen it flowed really nicely and rhymed brillantly...It was a really nice piece and something that I can relate so well too it is amazing to see the daily torment that you have inside your head written into words but it is a good way to release the pain.
I loved this and you are in no way alone xx -
Wow...definately an inspired piece... it doesnt seem forced at all... the flow is nice and so is the rhyme... keep up the good work... and always remember... though things may seem hopeless there is always some light to hold onto... things will always get better...
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nice job
i like this poem a lot ... i feel the words your saying -
cery good
A powerful write full of emotion -
Excellent
Very well written. Good rhyming. Keep up that inner fight and am sure things will get better, good luck - Di -
love is not alwayws a many spleno=endored thing..to many idiots out there...men and women... this was a good write..flowed very well..and conveyed your heartbreak wonderfully...peace to you..shzoosy
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I really like this poem, the rhyming seems so natural.
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i really dont feel like this is forced
in fact i love the words u used
it just matched perfectly
and if this is how u rhyme
then plz continue
i just love this poem
i relate to it
and i know how it feels
keep it up!
~NeVeR faLL iN LuV~
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