Bean Nighe dreaded and feared
Washed my beloved’s shirt one night
She bent over the rocks
And dipped in the cloth
A steady, rhythmic in and out
I had walked to the river
Though my love was to come
But I chanced upon the Bean Nighe
She sang to me…
Though it was for him
“So do leing, so do leine ga mi higheadh.”
“It is your shirt, your shirt that I am washing.”
I stood in horror
And watched in fascination
Again and again a rock she used
A glance from the Bean Nighe
Sent me running for home
For the light and the warmth I crave
When I stumbled and lurched
And fell upon
My own true love’s still form
Laying in his soaked stained shirt
No more. No more.
Author notes
`~fairies and magical things~`
Bean Nighe is the Scottish version of the Irish Bean Sidhe or Banshee. But it is considered a fey.
Written April 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- ~* Fairies and magical things *~ by .
300 points, ended April 18, 2006, 4 entries
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Wow great poem. I actually didn't know you wrote poetry since all I had ever read were your stories. I am impressed. Terrified, but impressed
I don't see anything that I would change. The write is very clear in meaning and paints a vivid picture of the story that it tells. Now I am going to check out more of your poetry
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i thought this poem was really good write more
i loved the poem it was good and thanks for commenting on my story and still wriing part two of the story -
great
Yes indeed well written great flow an excellent read thank you for sharing it. mike -
aww this is a really good poem, different but good
well good luck xXxalixXx
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