You promise to me,
That you would stay with me
I believe every word
That ever can out of your mouth
I never believe what I heard, about you
But, all you wanted to do was go down south
Then leave me
Once you had me
Promised me that you will love me forever
I even gave you the key
That lead to my heart
But your love has departed
Why did you make promises you couldn't keep
Many sleepless nights I cry myself to sleep
I told you before this love began
Don't make promises you couldn't keep
Yet still you did
And I still remember the day
When you ask me if I would have your kid
And how, we use to lay
Next to each other
And look into one another eyes
Until our love died
Now you don't love me no more
And now you ignore
Me, when you see me
We didn't have to end this way
All I ever wanted was for you to stay!
Author notes
*maurice
Written April 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- </3Broken Promises</3-Winner takes all by OurxBeginning.
375 points, ended April 16, 2006, 19 entries
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This is kind of sad..I've recieved a lot of entries about heartbreak. Yours was a little different..and holds a lot of emotion. It's a little short but it's still powerful. Thanks for entering and good luck.
~Morbid[♥]
