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You are my sunshine (A twist on a lullaby)

The only sunshine that you bring
Burns my eyes
Peels my skin
You are my sunshine
My only sunshine
The painful sunshine

You make me happy
When you're gone
When you leave
When you aren't here
When you don't hurt me
Not like this

Skies are always grey
You bring the clouds
Your eyes
They kill me
You're words
Consume me
Kill me from the inside out

Author notes

Here's the twist:
You are my sunshine
My only Sunshine
You make me happy
When skies are grey
------> Think about it with the explainations from the poem... you like?
Written April 13th, 2006

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  • xmuffinxfacex
    April 13, 2006
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    I really like this, its pretty neat : )


  • Cuppycake
    April 13, 2006
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    Thanks!


  • petrichor
    April 13, 2006
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    I like that lullaby(the original), and I like your twist to it as well. You developed really good ideas from the one line into many lines. Very good.