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On crisp new canvass of plenty~
~ singing out in refrain~
~ Inhaled pallet colors~
~sunburst rays~
~High in sunlit dawning~
~in sweetness amber days.
~ Denial of the darkness ~
~exhilarated by the Spartan haze~
~Elongated swath dips of pallet hues~
~unyielding,relentless power strokes displays~
~Unchain enchanted energies~
~set this golden canvass ablaze~
~~~~Suseann~~~
4/13/2006
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Yet another feeble attempt at free verse.
Written April 13th, 2006
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It's every line is describing the artist inspiration to paint in hues and without inhibitions.Sorry you found it otherwise.
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brill
A really graet short, straight to the point beuatiful piece! Great discription! Well done! Keep writing! Haylow x
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"exhilarated by the Spartan haze"...but then I couldn't get a thematic connection between the lines. I am little confused.
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Such a beautiful portrait painted ever so eloquently with your choice of words...this is a wonderful piece...keep up the great work, many blessings to you.
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Lovely dear Suseann,
You paint such beauty in poetic pefection you already are a artist of beauty in your poetry. Your portrait is priceless because its who you are. Love ya buddy, Me ♥
Edited on Apr 13, 12:57 because ''.
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