I know this scene,
You and me in between,
We meet at fourteen.
We like the cuisine,
And most of all caffeine,
No wonder no gene.
My boobies are obscene
At Halloween,
If you see them u will scream.
We do not like routine,
We are like one trampoline,
more than projection screen.
Author notes
wierd , Humoristic
Written April 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- Which type of poems make the best kind of toilet paper? by fight.
300 points, ended April 25, 2006, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I cannot say anything....if i did it might be mean.....I dont like to be mean....so yeah...good luck
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defintly poop poetry...but nice flow
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Crap
I am so glad that I noticed this to be an entry for a competition on poor poetry.
I was struggling to think of positive to aid and encourage this write. LOL
My only comment would be that the flow of the write is excellent and builds to a good ending.
The content is ..... well......
Thank you and good luck in the contest.
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