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My Depression

My depression,
caused by my only obsession,
this is my confession,

Have you ever had a felling,
a feeling deep inside,
a feeling like your heart is on a path and is about to collide,
collide with your worst fear,
a fear of losing someone that is near,

I'm sick and tired,
couldn't there be someone, they don't have to be hired,
all i need is couple shots to be fired,
so then i can lay and rest,
i think it would all be for the best,

My depression,
way past the first stage,
its a battle i wage,
with a mind full of rage,
my life can fit on one single page,
a page so white and pure,
not suited for someone for who there is no cure......

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Written April 13th, 2006

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  • Nikki Rowles
    March 15, 2008
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    This is really good


  • LaVey
    April 13, 2006
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    wow this is deep and moving i dont even know what to say to it

  • haylow
    April 13, 2006
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    nice poem, really deep!!!!!!!