I sit gazingot the window,
dreaming of what my life should of been,
stuck in my dreamland world.
I like what I see,
this is what my like should of been,
dilled with happiness and glee,
instead of sorrows and seas of lies.
You loved me once,
until you had more,
kids of your own.
I get yelled at,
on a daily basis,,
I feel like I'm not loved,
because of this.
I still gaze out the window,
dreaming what my life could of been,
stuck in my dreamland world.
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Written April 13th, 2006
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Ya I wonder this everyday its like making the right or wrong decision... but oh well we all mess up eventually.. -
why thank you. i have problems with my family so i wrote this. i am also glad you like this poem as well as the style of it.
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Oh sorry i clicked twice!!!!
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brill
Great poem, i think there may be a spelling error in the first line! Without mistakes, man wouldn't learn!!! Tee hee!! Well done on the poem thought, it is amazing!! I love the style that you used, very unique! Haylow x -
brill
Great poem, i think there may be a spelling error in the first line! Without mistakes, man wouldn't learn!!! Tee hee!! Well done on the poem thought, it is amazing!! I love the style that you used, very unique! Haylow x
Edited on Apr 13, 10:08 because ''.
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