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No Dreams Tonight

i sit there,no dreams tonight
as u look down
maybe we need control
but we dont need lockdown
life,liberty and the persuit of happiness
sounds to me like a lie
so lets make money and forget our morals
while we lose our rights tonight

maybe some people still have what you dont
a heart
ill sit here and dream tonight
but you make me wonder whats the point
if we're all going to be the same
i dont want to take part

sometimes i dream of a much better place
where no one cares about anyones race
but that is such a far off place
in wich we will never reach

never give in
never give up
one of these days
we will win against these fucks!

Author notes

Old poem...dont ask just felt like puttin it up...(dont think its that great)
Written April 13th, 2006

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  • matt00024
    June 27, 2007
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    very good i thought

  • matt00024
    June 27, 2007
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    thats what i think about when i dream

  • Ika
    December 7, 2006
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    i like this poem. so true bout people today. keep it up

  • sneakers
    April 14, 2006
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    wow! this is really good. keep up the great work.
    sneakers

  • BadExample
    April 13, 2006
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    wow, i think this is great...the only thing i had a problem with was you using the letter "u" instead of the written out word...but i really like this...

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