world is grey
no black, no white
only a mixture
of the two
under moonlight
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Written April 13th, 2006
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under moonlight
Short but, sweet. I love the picture you added into this poem. Nice pick. We don't only read but, we can see what you mean.
world is grey
no black, no white
only a mixture
of the two
under moonlight
I like how you entered the moon in here. Without the sun we would probably be hopeless and not to mention dead. The moonlight is just that one mixed color. I doubt there is anything compared to the moon. -
ive always adored your short poetry. smile though sweety
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um ok
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really short.. someone in a weird mood or was there more you didn't want to say for fear of being branded a freak.. don't worry my child join the comunity, your always accepted.
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yeah as of late i write a lot of shorter poetry. every now and again i get something a lil longer. although i prefer the shorter
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From what I'm seeing in your style , your poems are short yet potent in their content . Nice job and keep writing .
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thank you
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Amazing poem... in only five lines... thats amazing... heh good job
}sea of lost souls -
honest
short
deep
and too the point this is a golden poem, keep it flowing cause yo have amazing talent. -
short and sweet. very nice.
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