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Sushi

I lost a dear friend today.
I held him close
As he passed away.
Watching me with eyes
Filled with love and fear.
I pulled him closer
And whispered in his ear.
The story of the day he was found
Broken and beaten
Laying on the ground.
So small and tiny
I feared he wouldn't live.
But for sixteen years
Love and devotion
Was all he could give.
A warm meow
When I was blue
A gentle purr
Saying I love you.
I kissed his head
And held him tight,
And cried my tears
As he left this life.
Now all I have are my dreams
Where he will visit me
And meow so softly
I am free.

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Written April 12th, 2006

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  • XXCrimsonRaineXX
    June 13, 2008
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    Wow, I really liked this. It really reminded me of my cat, Pippy, especially the lines
    The story of the day he was found
    Broken and beaten
    Laying on the ground.
    because she was beat half to death when we found her. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.

    XXCrimsonRaineX