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The Attack

I strike like a bolt of coherence,
through a sea of confusion,

My aim straighter and truer than my enemies',
I lay waste unto their feeble defense.

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Written April 12th, 2006

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  • tara wilson gold member
    September 19, 2007

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    Yes, being wise, certainly is more of an offense than a defense, I guess, both perhaps, and words are always much better to war with.
    Thank you for this entry


  • EyeRaven
    April 15, 2006
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    WOOOOOOOOOOOOW,
    i realize now that i still have so much to learn
    wise man, i learned new words today...
    keep them coming, i need vocabulary LOL
    good work ..... strong and straight


  • Paint Me Beautiful
    April 14, 2006
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    youre so smart

  • pruedence
    April 12, 2006
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    Less words, say alot...nicely done..with good meaning...Positive...uplifting...thanks for sharing