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New Mexico

It's the land where I felt happy,
The land where I felt truly me,
I always dream of being there,
Without any worry or care,
Golden mountains under the sky,
Here I believe I can fly,
The desert of silken white sand,
Open beauty across this land,
It's the place I need to be,
In New Mexico I am free.

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I live in England but about 2 years ago I went on holiday in New Mexico, America. I fell in love with it & it is the most beautiful place ever. Each line in this poem has exactly 8 syllables. Please say what you think!
Written April 12th, 2006

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  • Spikey
    April 23, 2006
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    Hiya sally wally doodle!!! cool poem, bit of a strange topic, i probably wouldn't be able do it so kudos to you!!! Soz hayz for stealing your phrase, but i WAS gonna say it " you painted a really brilliant picture of it", sounds gorgeous i'd love to go there!!! { u been there ??? }
    Spikester xx

  • haylow
    April 13, 2006
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    brill

    Hi saz, really nice poem!! Well done, you really painted a great picture of new mexico, it sounds like a parisise, BLISS!!!!!! I really wanna go after reading this well thought of well written poem!!! Thanx for your lovely write!! Haylow xxx


  • queen Moderators member
    April 12, 2006
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    This is beautiful My dad grew up in New Mexico in the mountains. Truly a wonderful place