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i asked one of them \

i asked one of them "why are you so happy"
answer came back"elections are coming near "
hearing this i was stunned.............





all party members put their best just to win,
whether they have committed crime or sin
they give assurance to people for this and that,
but after election all promises lay flat.
thoughts came to mind,why people become fool,
why cannot they choose right representative to rule..
lots of expenditure are made in election
why don't ministers make distribution,
of money among poors below povertyline?
this question always rises in the heart of mine

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Written April 12th, 2006

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  • xXblackenedXroseXx
    February 29, 2008

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    why cannot they choose right representative to rule..

    This line is kinda awkward. but otherwise it was a good poem


  • DrunkenRam
    February 24, 2008

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    This poses a really great question, it is sad that at election time I seem more and more to be choosing the lesser of two Weasels.
    Where have all the Lincoln's gone?