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Lover in Red

Our eyes are said to be the pathways to our souls
And yet, when I gaze into what someone may call hazel
I see the green of life
Swirled amid the browns of strength
Wrapped in the blue of passion
And a small glazing of yellow’s honesty
My private little window into the realm within your heart.

Oh and your smile
Your private gift for me
A daily perk no amount of coffee can withstand
I could compare it to a summer’s day
But even that, to me, will never be enough

The dream I have
To be held tight
My head on smooth bourbon strands
The sweet scent of nutmeg
And strong arms surround me
Hold me tight
Keep me sane

Can you see?
I have held myself away from the truth
Lived a lie
The candles burned fully now
And there is no escaping it

You are my light
My sun
My earth
My moon
My tide

May you shine eternally

Author notes

yep, its sappy, i know. yep, its cliche-ish, i know. isnt it perfect?
Written April 12th, 2006

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    April 13, 2008
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    It's so upbeat,so hopeful...

  • mysterydragon
    April 22, 2006
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    That was soooo great. i loved it.


  • Lost In Pain
    April 22, 2006
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    amazing

    this is absolutely amazing, i love the scene you paint so vividly. there are no words that i can type that can express how beautiful this is.

  • Arianna Liadon
    April 12, 2006
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    Ah so very grand lol, still can't get over the coffe part though...he he he where is mine now since you seem to be doing them on demand

    Arianna

  • Kazrith
    April 12, 2006
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    thanks, hehe, i was writing a love letter for a friend who is maddly in love.

  • Forlornfairy
    April 12, 2006
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    I love this , its just beautiful , FF

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