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This Isn't Right

Thunder roars
Angry and strong
Lightning strikes
Sharp and fierce
Rain falls
Sympathetic and cold
Signs from the heavens
All screaming this isn’t right
A soul came to them
Weak and distraught
They’re trying to give her back
But not succeeding
The deeds been done
And now all we can do is wait for the sun

Author notes

This girl that was friends with some people I know committed suicided about a weak ago and it stormed pretty much every day after she did it. This is just what got into my head. My advice: Never committ suicide, it really doesn't affect just you.
Written April 3rd, 2006

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  • aRdNeK
    April 12, 2006
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    Whoa, this is deep. I'm sorry to hear that this is a true story. Very good job portraying how suicide affects others by saying that it storms and you must wait for the sun. Truly an amazing write. Keep it up!